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@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ command line.</para>
<sect1 id="ms-manual.spaceprof" xreflabel="Heap profiling">
<title>Heap profiling</title>
-<para>Massif is a heap profiler, i.e. it measures how much heap
+<para>Massif is a heap profiler. It measures how much heap
memory programs use. In particular, it can give you information
about:</para>
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ be normally run.</para>
<para>Then, run your program with <computeroutput>valgrind
--tool=massif</computeroutput> in front of the normal command
line invocation. When the program finishes, Massif will print
-summary space statistics. It also creates a graph representing
-the program's heap usage in a file called
+summary space statistics. It also creates a graph showing
+the program's overall heap usage in a file called
<filename>massif.pid.ps</filename>, which can be read by any
PostScript viewer, such as Ghostview.</para>
@@ -181,8 +181,8 @@ possible parts of memory:</para>
<title>Spacetime Graphs</title>
<para>As well as printing summary information, Massif also
-creates a file representing a spacetime graph,
-<filename>massif.pid.hp</filename>. It will produce a file
+creates a file showing the overall spacetime behaviour of the
+program, in a file
called <filename>massif.pid.ps</filename>, which can be viewed in
a PostScript viewer.</para>
@@ -290,9 +290,9 @@ spacetime</para>
<para>The first part shows the total spacetime due to heap
allocations, and the places in the program where most memory was
-allocated (Nb: if this program had been compiled with
+allocated. If this program had been compiled with
<computeroutput>-g</computeroutput>, actual line numbers would be
-given). These places are sorted, from most significant to least,
+given. These places are sorted, from most significant to least,
and correspond to the bands seen in the graph. Insignificant
sites (accounting for less than 0.5% of total spacetime) are
omitted.</para>
@@ -374,8 +374,8 @@ the real code address is.</para>
default, or HTML with the
<computeroutput>--format=html</computeroutput> option. The plain
text version obviously doesn't have the links, but a similar
-effect can be achieved by searching on the code addresses. (In
-Vim, the '*' and '#' searches are ideal for this.)</para>
+effect can be achieved by searching on the code addresses. In
+the Vim editor, the '*' and '#' searches are ideal for this.</para>
<sect2 id="ms-manual.accuracy" xreflabel="Accuracy">